When typing out the second half of my rough draft so far, I had given myself just a couple of hours when I should have given myself more time. I, also, was in my living room with a tv show on in the background. This was not the best environment I could have been in to complete my paper. When I write the rest of my story, I will choose a better place to complete it.
My theme throughout my story would have to be confusion. Constantly, I was asking myself questions throughout the whole event. Questions like "Is this really happening?" "Am I dreaming?" "Why is this happening to my family?" I think I can fix up my paper and make the theme stand out more.